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 The elder trees Open in new Window. [E]
a short story based on a walk I had
by AnaStar Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought the detail and description in this piece was great. The imagery is excellent and you manage to paint a very vivid picture for the reader in comparatively few words. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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