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Review #4812288
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Carrion Luggage Open in new Window. [18+]
Items to fit into your overhead compartment
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         Review for entry/chapter: "If It Was A Snake It Would Have Bit YouOpen in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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If it was a snake, it would have bitten you. My mother likes using this saying whenever I'm looking for something, only to find it in a place I had already checked out, as it was hiding behind something, and I hadn't moved enough things around. Snakes themselves are also good at hiding too, especially if they have the right coloration or shape. One moment, you think that you're looking at a rope or stick, only to go Nope - that's a snake!

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An interesting piece to read.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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