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 Excerpt of the prologue for a long story Open in new Window. [E]
An excerpt from the prologue for a very long story I will be writing this summer.
by BoyBaggins Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job outlining the setting in this piece. It's detailed, has a lot of information, and yet is still presented in a way that's clear and easily digestible. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvememt.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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