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Home for May Day Open in new Window. [E]
Javier surprises his mother and sister for May Day.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A nice story to read. A young man finds out that his collage will be closed a day earlier than expected. As a result, he is able to head to his hometown, surprising his mother and sister as a result. Likewise, he is able to enjoy the town's May Day celebrations instead of merely hearing about them. A cute little story to read.

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Characters seem interesting.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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