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A Love Within  [E] There's so much love to give  |
| (5.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY!!! from "Anniversary Reviews"  Celebrating your writing this month with a review. Happy Account Anniversary Legendary❤️Mask ~ One flower, a powerful symbol of love and how one has beauty in a romantic soul to share. This is adorable. Yeah. I couldn’t decide what inspired this approach to create but for contest. If there were additional notes, it’s nice sometimes to see prompt or general motivation. Obviously, it serves as a romantic appliance, and get the special someone. The single image gives me pause, when I consider an approach to poetry that gets right to it. I would be the one who knows the ache, longing. Just the title-line alone exudes feelings, does well to framework this offering. The conciseness and decided approach here, one image, one utterance, can strike when the sixth line drops. This could work for many lovers, on different levels, including the engagement and the ‘do-over’, adapted, could fit anniversary. Here, you offer as Valentine. It could be for one day, to not feel lonely, an opening to something more, or that long awaited declaration to free oneself of lonely love purgatory and seek out heaven in another. A rose braves elements and is thorny, guarded. A single rose as gift represents entirely different, symbol for one’s heart, capacity to love. The offering can be a powerful message, if not too much. With a simple stance on love with what feels like a tender promise is just the right amount for new love. Commitment is a big thing. The last line for me is a throw away, if making the poem a gift to reader, to show bravery, steadfastness in an honest confession. Perfectly fine as note, otherwise. You deliver on five lines a preface to a sixth line summation, with question and head turner, if not tipped off. It surprised me. This is the value of condensing to the essence the very aim and heart of a thing. I’m no rom-com expert (yes, I am), but this feels as great revelation in an element of surprise. This, poem as stated, would no doubt ease tension, break conflict, or just be the happily ever after moment. In my mind, all sorts of actors in all kinds of scenarios from boombox to knee, are delivering these lines to make us clutch our hearts. So, well done. Thank you for your generous heart. May it find a love to cherish. Happy Anniversary!  Sincerely, Brian disAbility Writers Group and Account Anniversary Reviewer  How were my personal pronouns? I’m asea at times to see life with broader perspective.  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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