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Review #4816760
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More Promptly Poetry PPC 5 and PPC 6 Open in new Window. [13+]
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by Ned Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Fly - Week 40" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Ned!

I’m here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Now that I see your six lines and I’ve reread the rules, I see two stanzas are not required after all… it wouldn’t matter to me, but I already “advised” someone else to add another stanza to qualify for the form requirement and the ppc5 rules as well… *Pthb* Whatever!

Anyway, this is such a pretty, lightweight, floating sort of poem. When I first saw the wrapped word rule, I thought it looked so infantile. After seeing what everyone’s done with them and using it myself, I’ve come to appreciate the nuances of using a word that can mean a few different things, and the flow is pleasing. You’ve crafted a charming wake up call… ooh, I’m remembering the old song “Beautiful Dreamer” now *InLove2* Say, maybe someday I’ll blog about that song. I have like ten different versions of it stashed on my old phone I use as an iPod.

Yep, your poem is a lovely little creation! *FlowerY* *Moon* *Flowerw* *Sun* *Clouds* *HeartP*

Oh, maybe toss the form details into a dropnote for tidiness *Smile*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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