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Review #4817305
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Daily Cascade Open in new Window. [18+]
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Beyond the GatesOpen in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Wondering what's past some gates, ones rusted and covered in vines. Is there treasure, terror, hope, or all of the above. Hmmmm - perhaps a robot drone might be used to scout the way? After all, they can fly or roll past most things safely, which can let one know what's on the other side. A useful trick to know of.

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An interesting poem to read.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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