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First Tanka  Open in new Window. [E]
My first Tanka about the sunrise on beach
by A'Leigh Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Snaps on this excellent offering in the tanka form.

I write a lot of haikus, but not so many tankas.

You have created a great, peaceful moment for the reader. Time alone on the beach is a gift. Sunrise or sunset alone on the beach is exquisite.

You should write more of these. The syllables are 5-7-5-7-7. Well done. Thanks for the reminder.

Thanks for mentioning the Lord. I'm glad you know Him as your personal Savior. Me, too.
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