I enjoyed reading your "Movies and Horses" poem every time I read it, including today.
Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end every time.
MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:
Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this "Movies and Horses" poem of yours sometime in the past and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "June" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. It is meant to be honest and respectful, and in accordance with WDC guidelines.
I loved your poem so much. It was a lovely tribute to the manly and equine loves of your life.
I thought the free verse style worked well with your poem's message.
My favorite line was the last line. Lovely writing and even better, it sounds like, a lovely life! Also, it was a fantastic way to conclude your poem.
I miss you here. Hope your anniversary causes you to pop back in and tell us how you're doing!
Your image in the thumbnail picture was perfect for this poem and I wondered if that was one of your personal family photos.
I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "Movies and Horses" poem.
I thought the family genre you selected for this poem was an appropriate match for it. If you wanted to add more, you might consider western, love/ romance, or cultural. As you likely know, we're allowed three genres.
My very favorite part of your "Testimonies" blog post is the way it made me smile as I was reading it. My Mom loved John Wayne so reading it also brought back happy memories of watching old movies with her.
As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.
CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "Movies and Horses" poem again tonight, and empathized with your sentiments that you expressed in it.
Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!
Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!
May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance, and may the Lord bless you and all that you do, during your anniversary month, and always!
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