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Review #4820765
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What Is Sum1 Up To Today? Open in new Window. [E]
Being Retired now, I thought that it was time for a new name to this Blog
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Work & Travel Memories" Open in new Window.
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window.*CakeP*



Hello, Sum1, aka Jim-D!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

*Bulletg* I enjoyed reading your "Work & Travel Memories" blog post every time I read it, including today.

*Bulletg* Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end every time.

*Bulletg* Congratulations on your well-earned retirement! You certainly had some interesting travels!


MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this "Work & Travel Memories" blog post of yours the day you wrote it, and I enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "June" file. *Smile* ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. It is meant to be honest and respectful, and in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Bulleto* I originally found your blog post in my notifications, because you tagged me in it. I was and am honored to be one of the many writing.com friends that you met in person! I think I have "only" met three of you in person so far, though I got to see Jody quite a few times when she was here, so maybe I could count her visits like McDonalds counts customers... that'd at least double my number. *Smile*

*Bulleto* I loved your blog post so much. It was full of fun facts, interesting memories, and made me feel like I was a little part of your retirement celebration and pleasant memories of work travel.

*Bulleto* I thought your style of writing was just right for the message of your blog post.

*Bulleto* You didn't bore me. Your post was interesting and fun for me to read. I do like shorter pieces though. I admit that if I had glanced down and it seemed like it was ten pages long, I might not have read it.

*Bulleto* I thought the travel, experience, and educational genres you selected for this blog post (and its folder) were appropriate matches for it.

*Bulleto* My very favorite part of your "Work & Travel Memories" blog post is how your kind and outgoing personality shined throughout it.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:

In the spirit of helpfulness, and because of the requirements of a new reviewing challenge I joined recently, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you! *Clap*

*Bulletb* I think you have a typo in this sentence and that "firzt" should be "first." Right now the sentence looks like this:
" Firzt & foremost, the people I met during my travels, particularly members of WDC."

If you made this change, it would look like this (done so you can see and for easy copy and pasting, should you decide to make the change):
" First & foremost, the people I met during my travels, particularly members of WDC. "


As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:

*Bulletv* I enjoyed reading your "Work & Travel Memories" blog post, and cheered for you and all that you have experienced and accomplished.

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

*Bulletv* Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance, and may the Lord bless you and all that you do, during your anniversary month, and always!

PWheeler





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