After reading your work, My impressions are these:Wow! What a story embedded into an acrostic poem. It definitely caught my attention.
My Favorite Part(s)
That Sebastion heard his lady love's final plea to burn the town down.
Suggestions/Questions:
I would love to see it turned into a story, whether a short story, or a full fledged one, I think that it would be awesome. Thank you for sharing your work, and happy 21st WdC Anniversary.
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