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 The End of The Beginning Open in new Window. [18+]
An alcoholic remembers Christmas, and the beginning of his last drink.
by super sleuth Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Dear super sleuth Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy 21st WdC Anniversary!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Wow! This story hit me in ALL of the "feels". Christmas is my favorite time of year, but I can see why it wouldn't be for the main character of this narrative.

My Favorite Part(s)

I like the honest, if not ugly truth of this person. From not taking it seriously, to being run over with regret and pain. It is a bold and honest narrative, and he feels like he deserves his punishment. An innocent life taken, accidently, but still.

Suggestions/Questions:

What gave you inspiration for this story? It is dark and introspective. I hope this is not based on a true story in your life *Shock2* .

Thank you so much for sharing. I will have to come see your port again soon.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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