After reading your work, My impressions are these:
Wow! This story hit me in ALL of the "feels". Christmas is my favorite time of year, but I can see why it wouldn't be for the main character of this narrative.
My Favorite Part(s)
I like the honest, if not ugly truth of this person. From not taking it seriously, to being run over with regret and pain. It is a bold and honest narrative, and he feels like he deserves his punishment. An innocent life taken, accidently, but still.
Suggestions/Questions:
What gave you inspiration for this story? It is dark and introspective. I hope this is not based on a true story in your life .
Thank you so much for sharing. I will have to come see your port again soon.
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