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Review #4821642
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 Weekly Poetry Challenge Five and Six Open in new Window. [13+]
where I will store my weekly poetry challenge poems plus a few other related poems
by JCosmos Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Sounds of Korean Spring " Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge *Smile*

This is such a charming, relaxing poem. I love when you write about the time you've spent in Korea, it's always a learning experience. Using the senses to guide us through it keeps it grounded and real, just as if we were there with you in the springtime park.

The vocabulary is simple, perhaps even trite, but we don't ask for much when it's something warmly relatable like this. Our minds illustrate it for us *Painting* *FlowerP* *Butterfly2o**Butterfly2t**Butterfly2y* *Tree2* *Leaf2G*

Your formatting is always large and clear, and all the pesky details have been handled well. I might suggest using three valid genres for your book item, so it can be found when browsing for poetry. You could use Experience, Personal, Drama, Environment, Philosophy, Nature, Community or any number of others.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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