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 Service Dog BELLA: I miss you. Open in new Window. [E]
About my service dog Bella my friend and helped who I miss very much.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM
A heartfelt dedication to the poet's service dog.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I could feel the honesty, sincerity, and reverence in the poet's voice.

*Star* STRUCTURE

The poem alternates starting with a 3 line stanza, then 4, then 3, then 4. Rythme scheme ABB CCDD EEF GGHH.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Although you're gone, you still live on. You're in my heart and mind each day." This is a very warm, poignant emotional description of how important the poet's dog was to her heart. Such honest expression connects with the reader in a heartwarming way.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader, and keeps them reading. The title fits the poem. Poignant.

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