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 Missing piece Open in new Window. [E]
Have you ever felt like you were changing yourself to fit in other people's story?
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job with this poem. I particularly liked the fact that you took a common interpretation about the metaphor you were using, and put a spin on it in the first few lines. It was a great way to engage the reader.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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