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 55 Word Dialog Only Story Open in new Window. [E]
My first 55 word story. It's not what it may seem to be.
by GrueSum1 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear (user:jim-d} ,

Hi again, and happy 15th WdC Anniversary!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I honestly didn't know where this story was going...I was totally off base in my initial thoughts, but I cannot argue with the ending. HA!

My Favorite Part(s)

That you parlayed a truth in just 55 words. Spiders! Yuck!

Suggestions/Questions:

Was this a contest or challenge? If so, you accomplished it spot on. Thanks for the chuckle, as always. I hope you are enjoying your retirement, in spite of the prescription aggravation.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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