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 Cluster Of Crows: flock together  Open in new Window. [E]
Crows gather together and enjoy the day
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM
An observation of crows.


*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I thought this was an interesting observation of the dynamics of scavenger birds.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. The last line has a light hearted rythme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a good flow when read out loud.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "flap those wings look for shiny things" It's a nice, easy description that helps to set a scene in the reader's mind and stirs a sense of curiosity.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader, with a lighthearted invitation to eat, and keeps them reading. The title helps to add context to the poem. Easy expression makes the author wonder about what those birds are up to.

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