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 Victory Open in new Window. [E]
An Acrostic poem for the one I love
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM
An acrostic poem about the power of love.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the simmering hint of passion behind the words.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is an acrostic poem using the word "Victory." The first letter of the line spells Victory.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "To not have you near is so unreal." This description really touches to the heart of romantic emotion, tapping into longing, desire, need, using colloquial speech.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader in an opposite way, and turns like a boomerang to keep the reader interested. The title fits the poem well. Nice word play.

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