Hello Ned

My First Impression:

Wow! The beach is memorialized in such a small space. You have taken a short poem and whittled it down to meet the criteria. I have such a hard time doing that, but you definitely made it look easy.

My Favorite Part:

The push and pull of the tides, the salty sea spray. It brought back memories of the Gulf Coast when a friend and I walked the beach.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

No suggestions, but thank you for sharing both poems. I enjoyed them both.