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 A Christmas Tree's Story Open in new Window. [E]
A story of Christmas, from a Christmas Tree's view
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Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM
This is a poem about what it feels to be a Christmas tree.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the story progressed and I thought the feelings the Christmas tree were realistic and honest.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a poem in the form of a Christmas tree. Well done!

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Someone praises my beauty, I’d blush if I could, instead I stand here silently," Our Christmas tree shares a lot of emotion here - there's a pride in how it's been decorated, and yet all it can do is stand silently and be pretty. It's a nice description that one can not only visualize, but allows the reader to feel the emotion as well.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The visual of the poem engages the reader, and keeps them reading, wanting to find out what will happen to the Christmas tree. The title fits the poem well. This is a great poem perfect for the Christmas season.

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