Hello D.B.

Hello there~ I found your offering on the Newsfeed as a featured poem.

My First Impression:

I am a gardening enthusiast, and I quite agree with the plight that your poem addresses. I've never been good at growing lettuce, but cucumbers, peppers, tomatoes and zucchini can get overwhelming at times. LOL.

My Favorite Part:

Your four line stanzas all rhyme, which is no mean feat. They flow, and rather than come off "whiny", gave me a chuckle.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Not sure how to fix the lettuce issue, but if you ever find out, let me know, please. I'm glad I'm not the only one out there.