Hello! I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" . I came across your poem while looking through the auto-reward items list. The title a description grabbed my curiosity because unfortunately I can relate to dealing with those icky little critters.

I normally suggest adding a picture to go with the title and description of an item, but I can't say everyone wants to see a picture of a cockroach on the ceiling. So, I'm going to leave that one alone in this situation. (Me-with shivers going down my spine)

I can't put my finger on it, but the last line seems a bit odd to me. It leaves questions. We beat on what? The bug on the ceiling? (That would make sense) We ignore it and just beat on with life? Maybe, you purposely left it open to interpretation. These are just my crazy thoughts about it. My idea is more like, praying it doesn't fall. LOL I didn't notice any grammar, punctuation or spelling issues.

Overall, it does make sense. This is one of those topics that doesn't need any extra explanations or many words. Great job! It will be interesting to see more of your work in the future.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .