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A Duo Of Demons Open in new Window. [13+]
A little Halloween tale about a bad boy . . .
by W.D.Wilcox Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello W.D.Wilcox Author Icon

Hi there. I found this story in the Read and Review port.

My First Impression:

This gave me "Screwtape Letters" vibes. The demons talking about trapping a "live" human.

My Favorite Part:

I enjoyed the dialogue between Anal and Poot. Funny names, by the way.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

I'm glad that I read this. It's been a while since you've written this story, but I can picture the scenes in my mind clearly. Thanks for sharing.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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