My First Impression: Short, sweet and to the point. I wasn't sure where this was going, but it tells a quick tale with the point of view from little Jimmy.
My Favorite Part:
The perspective is awesome and having read it, quite accurate. Poor little Jimmy, he just wants to explore. "Mean" mommy just wants him safe.
My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:
I found this in the Read and Review Port, and I'm glad I found it. Thanks for sharing.
Write On!!
You responded to this review 07/10/2025 @ 9:46pm EDT
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