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 then versus now Open in new Window. [E]
A story of how my father has made me.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello sweetgirl81 Author Icon

Hello. I found your writing on the Read and Review tab.

My First Impression:

I understand the "me and dad against the world". When I was younger, the sun rose and set on my dad. I was also angry that I was a girl and could not be "just like dad". I have since learned that my dad has feet of clay, but I still love him. I cannot imagine having gone through what you did growing up, but I can see how that has shaped your thinking.

My Favorite Part:

You wrote from the heart, which can be hard to do. It's easy to "gloss over" the events of the past, but you seem to be almost clinical in your thinking.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Keep surviving. If you've given up on your father, I'm sorry for that, but it is totally understandable. Be kind to yourself, and give yourself some grace. You do deserve it. Thank you for sharing.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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