Hello Sorji

Hi there. I found your poem in the Read and Review section.

My First Impression:

Mother Nature can be the most fickle of beings. This year's weather is no exception. When you expect drought, rain doesn't end. When you expect balminess, then the triple digits come in to blister. I do believe Mother Nature is bi-polar and needs to be on meds. LOL.

My Favorite Part:

You describe nature as fleeting - "wait come back!" This is fitting, and is reflected in your writing.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

No suggestions, just a fun read. Thank you so much for sharing.