K. Ray, obviously, I am slow on the uptake for this one. I read both, and I would have submitted the first one based on the number of words and the meaning I grasped from my third read-through. The second one was too elusive.

Why I read it? To express my appreciation for the time and input you provided on one of the items in my portfolio.

What I liked: I liked the first one because it was closer to the 25 words, and the story came through.

What I would change: Nothing based on my limited access to the guidelines that were provided

Recommendations: None

Write on, WRITE ON!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .