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 Hourglass in Reverse Open in new Window. [E]
Trauma loop
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Random review time, Synthia Author Icon

Creative, short and not very emotional but vivid in what is expressed. Metaphorical, those inner feelings we all carry, the trauma, and misunderstood sight. I think the first line, second stanza punctuation isn't correct. Other than that a well written prose. Thanks!

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Ever so tiny. Created by Legerdemain. I am the one eyed monster.

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