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by Angelica Weatherby- Octoprep Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "The Final Goodbye" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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Hello Angelica Weatherby- Octoprep

Thank you for taking the time to enter the June 2025 round of the "The Bradbury Contest" Open in new Window..

Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.


Positives

I thought the narrative was really compelling and filled with drama for so few words; it kept the story moving at a brisk, unpredictable pace.


Suggestions

I was hoping for a bit more context to the story. Which the pacing was excellent and moved along quickly, I think it came a bit at the expense of fully comprehending the backstory and setup to the story.


Overall

Overall, this was an entertaining read. Nice job!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!

Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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