Your item was advertised on the Newsfeed, so I thought I'd check it out.
My First Impression:
My relatable fear of monsters in the closet was when I was a lot younger. If I forgot to close the sliding door, I swore I could see the outline of Sasquatch (Bigfoot) in my closet.
My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:
I didn't know where this story was going, with the voices and whatnot...I would have been scared silly. I don't think a gun would have helped me at all. But a whole new world inside the closet was an unexpected twist. Thank you for sharing your little story.
Write On!!
You responded to this review 07/23/2025 @ 10:45pm EDT
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