I think wishing to trade time for another day in the past is something many people wish for. For a world that is no longer there, except in our memories.
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I found this poem in the Read and Review section, and I'm glad to have read it. Thank you for sharing part of yourself. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
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You responded to this review 08/09/2025 @ 5:58pm EDT
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