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 Another Birth Announcement Open in new Window. [E]
We now have a granddaughter. Wrote a Limerick for my grandson 2 years ago, now one for her
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Greetings, Dad!

Created in 2017... that means your lovely baby granddaughter is now eight years old *Shock2* oh my, how time flies. Those children grow up so quickly. I remember wondering why everyone always said how quickly it happens; being a rather solitary soul growing up, I had little concept of time and was just a kid myself anyway. My first realization of my own adulthood came as I watched the children of Imagine Dragons lead singer Dan Reynolds growing up... Arrow is a wonderful young lady. She was always mature beyond her years. Ah, now I'm digressing...

Your limerick is a joy to read, as we see your sheer delight in announcing the birth of your second grandbaby. The lines rhyme creatively and whimsically, and I have just one tiny suggestion that popped into my head as I read it.

Are you aware of how adorable otters are? They're so cute, I actually had a Merit Badge made... *Cue the search...*

Merit Badge in Otterly Adorable [Click For More Info] [Link To User greenwillow] , This final merit badge of your Chocolate Fudge Cake package is almost as sweet as the cake itself *^*Bigsmile*^* Rachel *^*Heartv*^*


Therefore, you may want to consider saying "she's as cute as an otter" to create a more sensible rhyme. Who wouldn't want to be compared to a sweet, cuddly baby otter?

Best wishes for your lovely family this upcoming holiday season *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *HeartO*
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