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The Sun Also Sets Open in new Window. [13+]
Bull Back In Time to Influence 20th Century Lit. (SHORT Story)
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Greetings, Hooves... Or Thing...? *Yikes* *Hand1* *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*

Ahh, a cute cow story! I never particularly cared for Ernest Hemingway, probably because I wasn't mature enough to understand the subtleties of his writing as I grew up. I remember some story of his in my literature books, about a woman and a man and an affair on the savannah and lions and... It just seemed rather dreary and depressing.

This is such a charming little story. I love the way you spoke in the voice of the bull and reminded us of how sad and unjust bullfighting is. I never understood what the point of it is. It seems cowardly. I like the idea of giving Hemingway a new perspective on bulls and how to write about them. Is that a subtle pun, writing compadres? Cool!

Lovely large font, an explanation at the bottom, three solid genre choices... I can't think of anything helpful to suggest, as per Annette's requirements. Honestly, I can't imagine why someone would criticize this harshly. It's understandable as a bit of lighthearted fun that gets one thinking. Perhaps the footnote would be better as a tidy dropnote placed at the beginning of the story.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *HeartO*
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