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 Birthday Candles Open in new Window. [E]
For her seventeenth...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings!

This is a beautiful little teenybopper poem, sharing the narrator's thoughts and affections for the young lady as she reaches an important milestone. It has a slightly mystical air, as though there is something royal or magical about the lady as she blows her candles out. We can almost see her, smiling radiantly, surrounded by loved ones. I see one of the chosen genres is "personal," and this was written almost twenty three years ago... Wherever either of you are now, I hope you're doing wonderfully.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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