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Review #4833949
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 A Flame, A River, A Sky Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Rhythm/Rhyme:
this poem about love had great flow from beginning to end.


Critique:
Wow. I could tell you poured a lot into this piece. It really gives the reader warm and fuzzy feelings of what is like to be in the depth of an all-encompassing, once in a lifetime love. You used great imagery that hung in my mind from one stanza to the next.

This was my favorite stanza


It is what we know,
and the shimmering veil of mystery,
an eternal truce
between the day and the night

You have great insights into the subject of love, with vivid clarity that leaves the reader longing for more. Great job!
This would be my name. }

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