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 The Tooth Angel's Picture Open in new Window. [E]
What does the Tooth Angel look like? Read on and find out...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is an amusing and lighthearted look at the ceremony of putting lost baby teeth under the pillow, from the point of view of the Tooth Angel herself. I can see the respect for your faith in that you avoid the pagan idea of a "fairy." The difficulties she went through in her appointed job, and the extreme measures the heavenly host took to protect her this time, are a little bit out of context since this is part of a series of letters, but it's a fun read. I chuckled at the "reveal" of the decidedly unglamorous angel at the end. She sounds like she could be someone's spinster aunt, with the cheeky, gossipy and rather nosy tone of conversation. You've painted a clear picture of her personality as well as her appearance.

You should choose a third relevant genre, such as Entertainment or Family, or Personal since I assume these are really "letters" you wrote to your young son. I also prefer a larger font size for ease and accessibility. A cover art would also help it look its best in lists of items. I see this was about exactly twenty years ago; I hope Timothy is a fine young man at this point.

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