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 What’s so FUNNY About Depression? Open in new Window. [E]
What I, a bipolar person thinks about what "other people" say about depression.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings!

I can feel your pain and frustration here. Depression is a terrible thing, and those who have no experience with it simply cannot understand how awful it is. I know I can't... I struggle to find words of comfort and ways to relate to those who share their distress with me. You've done well in sharing how it makes you feel and how you don't wish to be labeled as "crazy" and avoided. Some people may even be afraid of you. Humans have an innate, universal longing for meaningful connection with others, and we feel the fear of being left alone with your darkness.

Your theme is that one should never be afraid of or judge oneself or others based on a medical condition. We should research and do as much as we can to help, whether that means simply sitting quietly with someone in their pain or engaging them in healthy, friendly diversions. Your self actualization of understanding your life has meaning and significance despite the hardship, is what keeps you strong through the chaotic ups and downs.

I would suggest adding a word count at the top or in the subtitle so we know what we're getting into. Also, Size 4 Verdana font is always best for a clear, accessible and professional presentation. If you like, you can enter this personal essay at "Senior Center ForumOpen in new Window. for the chance to earn a ribbon on your honest, heartfelt feelings.

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