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 Mistaken Open in new Window. [13+]
A man finds his wife meeting with a stranger
by Corin Merek Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*PenB* First Impressions:

A great twist, and I didn’t see it coming. The way you set this up at the beginning made me think there would be a surprise, but I thought it would be along the lines of a special birthday gift for the main character or something else that would be positive while he suspected his wife was having an affair. The actual twist came as a bit of a shock.


*PenG* Suggestions:

The story was well written and easy to follow. The only thing I wasn’t sure about was the part where Duncan said Letty told him she would be out with a friend, and she agreed. If they were not a couple but he was stalking her, would they have had that conversation? It might just be me, maybe I missed something, but it didn’t seem clear.


*PenP* Final Thoughts:

This was a short but memorable story, and I enjoyed the read!




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