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 (You Want Me To) Send You A What? Open in new Window. [E]
A fun incident from my first day on a new programming job in the early 1980's
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings!

This was a super fun and enjoyable read, sharing a glimpse of life in the simple days when technology was just getting started. We chuckle at the mysterious lingo and smile at the explanation, which makes perfect sense. I even Googled the name of the email system to see if there's any mention of it anymore... There isn't. That makes your narrative essay a genuine, valuable time capsule, capturing a memory of something quite real and important that no longer exists.

I love your formatting, with large, clear font, well spaced paragraphs, and the touch of a smile emoticon to add whimsy. I would suggest reordering the primary genres, putting Technology at the beginning so that it comes up when people search for that genre specifically. I would assume fewer people look for Biographical items. Perhaps even Comedy would be a good primary genre to choose... This month's Journey Through Genres prompt is Comedy. You might even want to try your hand at joining it; I can see you have a sense of humor *Smile*

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *WingL**HeartO**WingR*
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