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Dear Me Open in new Window. [E]
My entry for the Dear Me competition regarding my plans for the new year (2013)
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I popped into your port for an Anniversary review and was attracted to your Dear Me entry for 2013.

Your entry was all about nature - trying to compose a Dear Me entry surrounded by the trees and leaves and the rain. Swift the dog was a nice companion and after the raindrops had fallen, there was another attempt to put together a Dear Me entry surrounded by nature's beauty.

I really enjoyed the imagery of the post and how being in nature is inspirational to writing.

My suggestion would be to establish clear writing goals for the year next time you attempt a Dear Me, as I believe the contest encourages more concrete goals that you check in with throughout the year to monitor your progress. Your entry paints more of a picture of the writing process as opposed to things you want to accomplish.

Overall, a fun, whimsical musing on the adventures of composing a Dear Me entry.

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