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Bound in Hell

[ASR]
Halloween Poem. Found myself speaking in the Cryptkeeper's voice while writing this piece.
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Review of Bound in Hell

Review by SpookyBee

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Rated: ASR

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My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE POEM

A soul is sent to the depths of the ugly netherworld.

WHAT I LIKED

The intro line was "Found myself speaking in the Cryptkeeper's voice while writing this piece." -- After reading the poem, I have to agree. The poem was creepy and eerie, and unsettling, everything the Cryptkeeper's voice is.

STRUCTURE

This is a poem that alternates a 4 line stanza with a 3 line stanza. In the 4 line stanzas the 2nd and 4th lines rythme. In the 3 line stanzas the 1st and 3rd lines rythme. Good job with the rythme scheme.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: He felt a gritty, angry fog, heave looming in the air, Tough to breathe and hard to see. Crows cawed a frightening scare.," This is the opening and it paints gritty, uneasy visuals. It settles the reader in and let's them know what to expect, evoking goosebumps on the arms and unease in the heart.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The title lets you know what to expect with the poem. Perfect creepiness for this time of year as Halloween approaches. I have no suggestions for improvement. Nice word play leaves the reader feeling creeped out.

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