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The Hat Experiment Open in new Window. [E]
A science loving teen builds a wild LED hat.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Talented Writer,

Greetings.

I came to your lovely story via a prompt I received in my mail.

This is the first time I am coming across a story written for ‘The Writer’s Cramp’ and I must say that I am impressed. How beautifully you have woven the prompt into your story! It takes talents to thresh out a story, polish it and finalize it, all within 24 hours.

Your 984 words flowed so smoothly that I came to its satisfactory end before realizing it: your story is that interesting.

And I also appreciate the wonderful way you have formatted your story with hats acting as the section dividers.

Please keep writing more. You have a flair for storytelling.

With Best Wishes,
The Uplifting Essayist


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