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 Review #4841383 |
 | Jack's Samhain Journey  [ASR] A poem based on the Irish story, Jack of the Lantern. WC: 30  |
| (4.5)  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEMThe poem was inspired by the legend of Jack O' Lantern.  WHAT I LIKEDA very concise poem that intrigues the reader and piques their curiosity to learn more about Jack O Lantern.  STRUCTUREThis is a poem with 2 couplets and an AABB rythme scheme. There's a nice beat to the poem that resonates with the reader. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "That poor old soul, that stupid Jack," This a very descriptive line that tells us a little more about Jack. He's been doing whatever he's been doing for a while now, and unfortunately, it's not something that he's excited to do. The line implies he's "forced" into doing it. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening gives and overview to the reader and lets them know what to expect. The title, again, speaks to what to expect. If anything, I might suggest a dropnote or a link to a website that talks a little bit more about the legend. I'm vaguely familiar with it. Overall, a good poem that fits into this time of year. An Angel Army Review
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You responded to this review 10/27/2025 @ 12:18am EDT