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Thousand+ Words for Nov. 28, 2025 Open in new Window. [E]
The Most Perfect Sphere in the Universe is a Nonrotating Neutron Star--or At Least....
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, sir, and welcome to writing.com!

This appeared on the random Read and Review button, so here I am again to provide feedback on another one of your tantalizing thousand word snapshots. I like how the information here is presented in a non-fictional, essay sort of style, casually describing information that "every schoolchild knows" to show us a theoretical future where we discover creatures nearly beyond our comprehension. And of course, you leave off at the most exciting part: how exactly are these microscopic bacteria type creatures more advanced than us in certain areas? By now, I know there's no chance of finding out, and personally,, since it's a useful exercise for you, I don't particularly care. It is fun to imagine, at least.

As always, a couple more genres would be useful, if you're interested in anyone finding your work. And some kind of simple, one or two words titles would be helpful to differentiate between all your dozens of different snapshots. But I guess the subtitles are enough. It's hard to make suggestions for improvement when we know you're just flying through, dropping an idea a day. Have you tried looking around for any sci-fi contests to enter, or considered submitting a story for a magazine? "Note: Tales from the Crosstimbers is now open for ..." is a link to an early submission call for a magazine which I've been published in myself. Go ahead, try it! I think the one complete story you posted recently, about the differently made human, would be a strong example.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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