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 Devil In Your Face Open in new Window. [13+]
An old poem from long ago
by Imaliloff Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I came across this in "Read & Review", so here I am! This poem shows someone fighting against negative thoughts and refusing to give in. The speaker feels stressed and close to breaking, but they keep pushing back. The strong words and repeated lines make the struggle feel real. By the end, the speaker stands firm and takes back their space. Overall, it is a direct, powerful poem about staying strong when your mind feels heavy. My only suggestion would to be to choose the genres to list it under so more people can find this great poem. Great job! Thank you for sharing.
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