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Do As You Are Told Open in new Window. [18+]
Inquisitors confront a woman. 300-word flash
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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This popped up on my Random Read & Review, so here I am! This story is exciting and moves quickly. It starts with a tense interrogation that immediately pulls the reader in. Saran’s answers build mystery, and the twist where she transforms into a dragon is fun and dramatic. The pacing is fast, the danger feels real, and the ending sets up more conflict with Boris and his crew. Overall, it’s an engaging, easy-to-follow fantasy scene with a strong reveal. I don't have any suggestions. I'm assuming this is for the Daily Flash Fiction Challenge, based on the prompt usage. You've crafted a great story with limited words!
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