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 Simple Love Open in new Window. [13+]
My take on simple Love
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about the power of love.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The example given really highlighted the theme of the poem which is "Simple Love."

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free verse poem that starts and end with a couplet and the middle three stanzas are 4 lines each.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "I asked for pitter-patter raindrops.
You’ve given me a cyclone," This a vivid description that describes how love can start off with small expectations and turn into a BIG result.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening starts off with an easy metaphor involving chewing gum and love - it doesn't let go. The reader would have to agree. The title is a good, reflective fit for the poem. An honest and easy reflection on love.

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