Hello,

I discovered your item in connection with the Angel Army's "Earn the Badge" challenge, and would like to offer the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

The simile that opened this poem had great imagery and impact. I also like the repetition in the third stanza which gave the middle part of the poem a good structure. I liked that the lightness and brightness of an emotion like love was reflected in the tone of the piece.


Suggestions

It was a little unclear what the bigger picture intent of the piece was. At the beginning there's a simile that says love is like an adhesive, then the second stanza is about love being something that can't be held in. The fourth stanza has love like an overwhelming, overabundance of something. Given the title is "Simple Love," it felt like the poem was trying to communicate a lot of different, complex thoughts on all the things that love can be.


Overall

Overall, this was a good read and has a lot of potential.

I hope you've found this review helpful.

Sincerely,

Jeff
"Rating & Reviewing Philosophy" 

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .