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Catching October Love Notes  Open in new Window. [E]
free verse poem of romance in an October setting
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem captured the ambience of the season and wove in elements of budding romance effortlessly.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I felt like I was a leaf on a branch getting ready to fall, watching two people enjoy the nature walk.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font making the presentation visually appealing.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "With trembling hands, I caught love notes, dancing on the evening breeze," I really enjoyed this word play here. I have a sense of two young people walking hand and hand, smiling as they enjoy the breeze and the swirling notes of autumn around them. I felt a tad guilty peeking in on them.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening invites the reader for a barefoot walk and keeps them reading. The title is reflective of the poem. Excellent word play. I enjoyed the totality of the moment of the poem.

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