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Memories Open in new Window. [E]
When Love Fades
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A very relatable situation, well expressed within the chosen form.
My only little quibble is for the word 'brains' - I somehow associate love with the 'heart', so maybe tweak it a bit for that couplet ... ?

I appreciate the note you give at the end about the form you've used.
That helps me enjoy the poem more.

Thanks for sharing!
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